regarding some deleted poem...	1-May-02/1:53 PM
Sounds like a creative writing class I once attended. Ten haiku a session for nine weeks. Ugh!
Re: Question of the day by PooP	1-May-02/1:56 PM
I didn't think it was that bad. It's easy to have one's opinion about a person cloud how you read their poetry, I guess. I don't know PooP.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-May-02/1:56 PM
Tee hee! The third stanza is my favorite.
Re: Social Parody by skaskowski	1-May-02/2:00 PM
I also like the first three lines but don't get the last one.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-May-02/2:01 PM
This is like an "aftershock" of Burning Night, right? I think the funny thing is that woodsmoke is such a comforting smell to most people.
Re: Persephone by Lynn	21-Nov-02/4:20 PM
It's nice to see one of your poems here. You're really very talented. You should post more.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Dec-02/11:44 AM
I liked this poem. There were some parts I didn't quite understand. Fourth stanza, second line; Ninth stanza, first line. It has good flavor, though. And I like the allusion to um ... brain dead ... Mending Fences, I think.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jan-03/3:08 PM
I think you could do without the last 3 paragraphs (esp. the last) but altogether this is a solid poem.
Re: The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>	3-Jan-03/3:28 PM
It's cool that he did it and she said yes. Congrats to Kaolin and his fiancee - may the marriage be a happy one. Nice poem too.
Re: That feeling by trisha	7-Jan-03/10:00 AM
This has intensity but you should really not use "u" instead of "you." It's grating and annoying. Nice description of depression, though.
Re: profile of an abuser by inka	10-Jan-03/8:35 PM
It would be a better poem if you took out all the self-censorship and put in the real swear words you were using. It would hit harder. Never self-censor. It cuts the oomph out of your poetry.