| Re: Coming out of the Darkness by ChunkyHunkyMonkey |
20-Mar-04/12:01 AM |
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AWWW,i like this poem,good job
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| Re: Friendship thrown away by cutiewithceli |
20-Mar-04/12:03 AM |
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this is so true,i love this poem,and i loved how you wrote it,there is a little bit of "forced"ryming which i dont like but other than that it was great
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| Re: esopus creek by unknown |
20-Mar-04/12:10 AM |
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kinda.....weird,but good,just confusing
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| Re: Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow |
20-Mar-04/12:12 AM |
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*shudders* that was creepy,nice write though,it could have flowed better though
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| Re: Stolen Away by Carvaceous |
20-Mar-04/12:13 AM |
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AWWW,how sad but true,im guessung that you are referring to being heartbroken,good job,nice write
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Mar-04/12:14 AM |
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| Re: Masked by savannah |
20-Mar-04/12:19 AM |
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dont like the cussing,there are spelling errors but it has a good idea behind it and im guess that you just wrote this when you were made,it was just a vent poem.
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