on Darkness by KathrynR
15 Aug 2002, 1:47 PM
this poem is kinda weird but also brilliant in the way that it has been represented.i think this poem shows no real understanding of the word darkness as its title but yet the ending is brilliantly thaught out and deserves a good mark.
on Summer Day by Tekara
16 Aug 2002, 10:43 AM
nice one i like that poem its very good and happy!!!!!!
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 10:41 AM
very good.
you must have very mixed up feelings!!!!!!
is this what was truly going on in your head??????
if so i think from a persons perspective a poem is best written if it is actually part of someones feelings dont u think so to?
but yet again i must say that poem is truly brilliant whell done
you must have very mixed up feelings!!!!!!
is this what was truly going on in your head??????
if so i think from a persons perspective a poem is best written if it is actually part of someones feelings dont u think so to?
but yet again i must say that poem is truly brilliant whell done
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 10:56 AM
this poem is truly great and it makes you think of how easy certain things are.
some people may regard this poem as simple and stupid and i believe it is but only to a certain degree and it is still a good poem despite certain dissagreements people have with it.
some people may regard this poem as simple and stupid and i believe it is but only to a certain degree and it is still a good poem despite certain dissagreements people have with it.
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 10:46 AM
brilliant...it would be better if you could come up with a surprise ending but still it is verry good!
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 1:52 PM
brilliant brilliant.
it is surprising to think of what was going on in your head when you wrote this poem but all i know is it took me a while before i could understand the meaning of this poem.which is quite a good thing if it makes a reader wanna read it again to properly understand it.
it is surprising to think of what was going on in your head when you wrote this poem but all i know is it took me a while before i could understand the meaning of this poem.which is quite a good thing if it makes a reader wanna read it again to properly understand it.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 2:05 PM
wicked i like it give me more......!!!!!!
you could put that in a rap song and people would love it
you could put that in a rap song and people would love it
on Vigor Mortis by WarrenGDawg
15 Aug 2002, 1:59 PM
woah you must be one with the ladies with all that talk.you are brilliant,amazing i cant believe what i have just read it is too good the words used are just too perfect and they fit in this poem amazingly