Re: Darkness by KathrynR	15-Aug-02/1:47 PM
this poem is kinda weird but also brilliant in the way that it has been represented.i think this poem shows no real understanding of the word darkness as its title but yet the ending is brilliantly thaught out and deserves a good mark.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Aug-02/1:52 PM
brilliant brilliant. it is surprising to think of what was going on in your head when you wrote this poem but all i know is it took me a while before i could understand the meaning of this poem.which is quite a good thing if it makes a reader wanna read it again to properly understand it.
Re: Vigor Mortis by WarrenGDawg	15-Aug-02/1:59 PM
woah you must be one with the ladies with all that talk.you are brilliant,amazing i cant believe what i have just read it is too good the words used are just too perfect and they fit in this poem amazingly
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Aug-02/2:05 PM
wicked i like it give me more......!!!!!! you could put that in a rap song and people would love it
Re: Shadow by javelinne	16-Aug-02/10:37 AM
verry whell done and whatever was going on in your mind must have been very strong willed for you to come out with such exspressed words
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Aug-02/10:41 AM
very good. you must have very mixed up feelings!!!!!! is this what was truly going on in your head?????? if so i think from a persons perspective a poem is best written if it is actually part of someones feelings dont u think so to? but yet again i must say that poem is truly brilliant whell done
Re: Summer Day by Tekara	16-Aug-02/10:43 AM
nice one i like that poem its very good and happy!!!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Aug-02/10:46 AM
brilliant...it would be better if you could come up with a surprise ending but still it is verry good!
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Aug-02/10:56 AM
this poem is truly great and it makes you think of how easy certain things are. some people may regard this poem as simple and stupid and i believe it is but only to a certain degree and it is still a good poem despite certain dissagreements people have with it.