Re: Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina	15-Jan-05/12:08 PM
ok ummm the back and forth conversating that goes on in peoples comment areas is histarically and idiotically funny, and secondly, awesome expression of how when men are playing a sport and unable 2 fondle unexpecting women, they resort to fondling themselves ***9***
Re: i think by PhSbLoNdE569	21-Jul-04/10:49 PM
OMG i love this poem ash!! its very very good, definately ur best and heres a 10!!!!! .. which is well deserved
Re: youre there... by PhSbLoNdE569	21-Jul-04/10:46 PM
A very nice expression of the whole jared situation ash, which i do believe is the problem in this poem. Or maybe its sum1 else cuz u wrote this in march n jared was more recent.... hmmmm well ne ways, its nice .. and heres a 8
Re: a comment on youre there... by PhSbLoNdE569	21-Jul-04/10:45 PM
Well if 'one' really is becoming a shriveled husk of a person because you are reading the same poems over and over again, maybe 'one' should not read any more poems if your soul purpose is to criticize...just a thought
Re: depressed by PhSbLoNdE569	21-Jul-04/10:35 PM
hey! and u say MY poems are depressing??? lol its a very good expression of w.e u are feeling! and heres a 9
Re: a comment on What Do You Do? by tori	7-Nov-03/3:03 PM
oh thanks, thats reallllllll nice. but excuse me, lots of ppl think its good so go to hell