Re: depressed by PhSbLoNdE569	21-Jul-04/10:35 PM
hey! and u say MY poems are depressing??? lol its a very good expression of w.e u are feeling! and heres a 9
Re: youre there... by PhSbLoNdE569	21-Jul-04/10:46 PM
A very nice expression of the whole jared situation ash, which i do believe is the problem in this poem. Or maybe its sum1 else cuz u wrote this in march n jared was more recent.... hmmmm well ne ways, its nice .. and heres a 8
Re: i think by PhSbLoNdE569	21-Jul-04/10:49 PM
OMG i love this poem ash!! its very very good, definately ur best and heres a 10!!!!! .. which is well deserved
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jan-05/11:59 AM
all in all, a bit strange 2 be inspiring 2 speak with the devil, but a nice expression of emotions and actions, and therefore a 8
Re: Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina	15-Jan-05/12:08 PM
ok ummm the back and forth conversating that goes on in peoples comment areas is histarically and idiotically funny, and secondly, awesome expression of how when men are playing a sport and unable 2 fondle unexpecting women, they resort to fondling themselves ***9***