regarding some deleted poem...	28-Feb-04/11:47 AM
Nice cat!
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Feb-04/12:29 PM
Good rythm.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Feb-04/12:33 PM
Don't know about this one. It seems forced or maybe too playful.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Feb-04/12:42 PM
trite. subject not personalized enough.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Feb-04/10:37 AM
cute
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Feb-04/10:59 AM
stammer stutter flip flop hey, that is not what I meant to say.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Mar-04/10:40 AM
cabin fever hey hey hey
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Mar-04/11:35 AM
Fantastic!
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Mar-04/11:36 AM
Very nice!
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Mar-04/11:38 AM
In fact, better than nice. You have shown genius here.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Mar-04/12:02 PM
pretty heavy grief
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Mar-04/12:06 PM
good melencholy
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Mar-04/3:15 PM
A little jerky. Just an opinion.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-04/8:48 AM
This should go back to the... I don't know what it should go back to, but it is not good.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-04/8:50 AM
Cold
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-04/8:51 AM
Needs a bit of filling in. No feeling of lingering.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-04/8:59 AM
I don't quite get this one. I seem to see a grave occupied by a spider-bitten person doing a dance.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Mar-04/8:21 AM
Really nice last stanza.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Mar-04/8:32 AM
Simple. Should make a good song.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Mar-04/8:59 AM
masterbation