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3-Feb-07/4:32 PM |
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It is a bit better with a rhyme at the end. I suppose a belt is a comforting way to remember a pet unless the fit is tight. As a whimsy this is okay. I up my zero to a one.
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5-Feb-07/5:59 AM |
Are you actually trying to write poetry?
I only ask because you are so bad at it, that you must be having some sort of a private joke with your postings. I am a bit curious as to your intentions.
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7-Feb-07/7:13 AM |
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Aside from a least one spelling error, (you might try using spell-check. I use to my great advantage [It almost makes me appear educated.]; some people really get their butts out of whack when a letter is left off or placed in the wrong spot.) , this is really a fine piece. Thanks.
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8-Feb-07/4:12 PM |
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Does not even make it to the lowest form of greeting card.
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10-Feb-07/7:10 AM |
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YOU ARE WELCOME TO STAY THERE!
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14-Feb-07/5:09 PM |
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Is this the best you can do, or is this the best you want to do? Not just this post, but the other two as well are really rather poorly done.
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16-Feb-07/7:04 AM |
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3-Mar-07/4:32 AM |
nigh unto scent a mint
simple but half way good
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8-Mar-07/6:05 AM |
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A good capture. So you can write good stuff sometimes. What a surprise!
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17-Apr-07/5:16 PM |
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Don't know what happened. rockmage
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11-May-07/7:22 AM |
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interesting approach, but no go
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4-Jun-07/7:07 AM |
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5-Jun-07/8:52 AM |
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8-Jun-07/6:59 PM |
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10-Jul-07/8:07 AM |
âClaiming Everestâ does not seem to have anything to do with its title. It is similar, quite similar, to Dovinaâs âMiles Apart, You Sayâ and equally bad. I am very sorry to say.
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4-Aug-07/6:21 AM |
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You really Think This is a poetry?
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14-Aug-07/5:32 PM |
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snort chuckle 'blows nose' tosses tissue
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31-Aug-07/8:25 AM |
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16-Sep-07/5:35 PM |
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toke a few more and you will think you had
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