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11-Feb-04/10:55 AM |
More a short story than a poem, but a very good one.
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11-Feb-04/10:58 AM |
All these lonely people... a huge club it is.
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11-Feb-04/1:42 PM |
Is there a contest for lonely poems? Not that I want to write them, but there are so many, it seems there should be. Anyhow, as lonely poems go, this one is great.
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11-Feb-04/4:30 PM |
I like it. You are getting better.
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11-Feb-04/6:39 PM |
Certainly fits the title.
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12-Feb-04/4:53 PM |
A little inspiration can be all it takes
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14-Feb-04/9:36 AM |
Perhaps if you worked on this a bit.
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16-Feb-04/10:51 AM |
good perspective nice grate
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16-Feb-04/11:36 AM |
Just as bad as the one before.
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28-Feb-04/11:39 AM |
Very funny! Nice expansion to contraction.
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