regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/10:21 AM
This is funny. I know this is not polite, but it reminds me of a fart.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/10:24 AM
Yes! It Is Weak!
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/10:33 AM
What ever you said (I won't pretend to understand), it kept my attention from the start. You said it well, whatever it was.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/10:35 AM
A truely wonderful song. You make the boredom zing.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-03/10:43 AM
Just a simple complaint! Does not make a good poem. Where is the angst. Not even a good insult!
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-03/7:47 AM
Greed is greed. Why slave to the #? Silly!
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-03/8:45 AM
Definite impression of fun and the having of it. Good Job. Good image.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/2:13 AM
I smile and Smile. I even giggled on cue.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/2:18 AM
"A very sad song,” I whispered to me.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/2:22 AM
Somehow the imagery did not flow 'right' for me. I have no advice as to how to make it do so.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/2:23 AM
Way too bland!
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/9:05 AM
Man above, gods below? This is hard to encompass. Large is small and small is large and back again. I get a bit queasy.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/9:19 AM
Wow! Very wistful!
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/9:00 PM
The second time reading through aloud, the outrage came through strong and hard, ready to erupt.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/9:43 PM
Happy Birthday slightly delayed!!! I'll be 56 in a couple of months. Things don't change. Smiling is best. I can't always do that.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/10:23 PM
Does this mean Hell's fire is getting dimmer?
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/10:26 PM
This fits the lyric category. Read it a couple of times out loud. The music is there.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/10:30 PM
Like a groom to his/her virgin wife on wedding night, nervousness before the consummation..
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/10:31 PM
Simply and well said.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/10:34 PM
I'm starting to get cross-eyed. Lovers.