regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/10:37 PM
Never saw a purple sunset. Tis another song.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-03/10:41 PM
L2-pushed to the side to vanishes....????? L(-I desirer from you...desire? Very good self pity. I don't understand line 2. Sorry!
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-03/10:05 AM
L22---flesh and steal...steel? Though I do like the whap I get at the image in the way you have spelled it. Your yearning comes across strong.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-03/10:17 AM
OOOO! and OOOOOO!!!! I like this. I have so much trouble thinking and judging how to view and express. This looks to be an invaluable aide. *** APPLAUSE! ***
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-03/7:15 PM
L6---This is unwelcome here...What is unwelcome? I can't tell if this is self-pity or bragging. The message is very mixed.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-03/7:17 PM
Ah. I see. You are metamorphosing.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/8:39 AM
Very good humor!
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/8:52 AM
Your sense of humor is excellent.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/1:22 PM
Beware the Brick!
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Oct-03/11:10 PM
Damn! I don't want to be there!
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Oct-03/9:10 AM
The sentiment is good.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Oct-03/8:07 PM
I very much enjoyed this. It was hard to read aloud, as I kept interrupting myself with laughter.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Oct-03/8:09 PM
The last verse makes worth the reading of the first two, though, you could have left off all but the last and had a much better poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Oct-03/8:16 PM
Definitely singable. I can see Mr. Rogers crooning this to his shoe.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Oct-03/8:23 PM
Very good. Wonderful images. I like the comparison made between the last verse and the rest.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-03/10:16 AM
There is just no understanding (to me) the why of the popular idols. Seen Elvis lately. Perhaps it is because there are no moral issues or admonishment involved. Good question, Well asked!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-03/6:13 PM
All that is missing is majestic music!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-03/8:49 PM
:0) I was worried about that poor crab, now it's a bite. Your images are fantasic as usual. 23.49
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-03/8:51 PM
A nice needy love poem with zing!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-03/8:53 PM
I liked the 4th stanza. The rest does not live up to it.