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10-Nov-03/5:12 PM |
These dimensions do nothing for me.
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10-Nov-03/5:39 PM |
Pardon me... I like this one. Good bump in the night. thump thump
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11-Nov-03/8:17 AM |
Again the cryptic. Environmentalism? Or a hefty paycheck?
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11-Nov-03/8:21 AM |
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11-Nov-03/6:00 PM |
Unfeeling Wretch! This zombie was some mother's child> well, maybe not. I retch along with you. 24.4444
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11-Nov-03/7:07 PM |
Such a messy love--- with a heart floating mysteriously about. How does your body function?
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12-Nov-03/10:01 AM |
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12-Nov-03/10:04 AM |
Smile, You poor critter. You'll be a long time drowning.
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12-Nov-03/7:26 PM |
Just off hand, Does this not qualify as a PIMPLE?
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12-Nov-03/7:28 PM |
Sound like we are dad to me and food for the crabs. 20.0001
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12-Nov-03/7:31 PM |
OOps! did not mean the slip of dad is dead. Meant Dead Is Dead.
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12-Nov-03/7:37 PM |
Madam Pandora I Presume? Or the Boogie Man's boogers?
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12-Nov-03/7:40 PM |
But it is not mine! I am going to be TWINKLES! And judging from your name (nothingtoanyone) it can't be yours.
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12-Nov-03/11:53 PM |
Sounds a bit hellish. Dying of a physical disease? Leaving as of a timed schedule---as in the relationship will only last x amount of time? Leaving as in till death do us part and it may take years? 20.88845
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12-Nov-03/11:59 PM |
Let me say second off that I do not read comments before I write my own, so warning me about tears and such after the fact that I have done so gets no sympathy. Besides, why should you ask for consideration or a light hand on a critique of a poem you post on a public site? Seems rather silly. It is a good Woe Is Me even so!
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13-Nov-03/6:38 AM |
An where might this party be? Another crpytic thingy that I do not understand.
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13-Nov-03/9:32 AM |
These nicely worded phrases lead to the Queen? I do not see how.
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13-Nov-03/9:33 AM |
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13-Nov-03/2:55 PM |
Nice little ditty. Poetry can be a cold shoulder to cry upon. 22.3334
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