regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/7:01 PM
I think the poet owes it to the poet's self to be as clear in the message as possible. Otherwise, the poem becomes a riddled sphinx. Good quest. 22.222
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/7:16 PM
Death will come to every seed, No one is willing to set down their gun, I don't understand this part...as if I understood the others, but this seems out of place. 18.9993
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/7:19 PM
Buck up little one. You sound just as messy inside as out. 20.00006
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/7:21 PM
Just wait till you hit bottom! 21.17489
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/7:22 PM
Stood up? 16.55783
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/7:33 PM
Try Click and Clack? Isn't the ground a bit hard there for a hole to be dug? A short in the ignition? For making me think in this diagnostic fashion- 23.33214
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Nov-03/8:16 PM
The sounds and thoughts you portray are far from domestic. Yet that is the message I get. Such a conflict. Who is winging bullets at the granite? 23.33256
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Nov-03/8:32 PM
Van Gogh was as blind as me. I made many a museum guard nervous checking out this theory. Nietzsche might be me if reincarnation is indeed so dreary. 24.6666
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Nov-03/9:57 AM
This confuses me. I guess I am not 'like us' and am only like me. Communal feelings always perplex me. I give you my doubtful benefit that this piece says something.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Nov-03/10:15 PM
I'm awaiting...Where it be? Which office are you seeking? Avoid it at distance I will. Please don't write swill. It's yucky! Be Pucky! OH, my poor beleaguered intellect; I used too many thoughts for these words. 21.7499823511-4
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Nov-03/11:51 AM
I do not get this one. Mostly I see a person smoking a cigarette and not being concerned about health until it is to late.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/10:44 AM
This has got pizzazz! 24.333
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/10:46 AM
Reads like a romance novel. 21.134563
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/10:48 AM
If you ain't got anyone yet and this is how you write... I cna't imagine the fireworks of what having someone will do for your style. 21.7777
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/10:50 AM
Death and love in one fell swoop? 20.9453
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/11:09 AM
Best mental constipation poem I have read yet. 25.444
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/11:14 AM
If you left out line nine, this would be much better.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/11:16 AM
I wish there were seven of me, but we would all probably fight about what to do and when. Good standoffish piece. 23.3333
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/2:00 PM
A RAPE OF MIND AND BODY? 21.111
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-03/5:10 PM
Too much like a fairy tale rewritten.