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13-Nov-03/2:57 PM |
Z My point exactly. 23.7774
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14-Nov-03/7:33 AM |
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14-Nov-03/7:35 AM |
Another TRUE poet with a real poem.
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14-Nov-03/7:46 AM |
A bit self absorbed are we?
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14-Nov-03/1:32 PM |
Held my interest quite well from beginning to end.
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14-Nov-03/9:03 PM |
I am sure you meant well.
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14-Nov-03/9:04 PM |
As free verse it sucks. As a Pimple it is pretty good.
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15-Nov-03/12:07 AM |
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15-Nov-03/12:34 AM |
I certainly hope not. This sounds like the fatmansinging.
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15-Nov-03/12:39 AM |
This brings a smile. I needed one. Thank you.
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15-Nov-03/7:56 AM |
I only say ditto to what I said befor. Huzza Shuushin!
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15-Nov-03/10:13 AM |
enev though there's enough to make our mistakes
This line gives merit to the poem
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16-Nov-03/9:49 AM |
The picture you paint! Love Sick. Sea Sick. Motion Sick.
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16-Nov-03/10:32 AM |
This is not up to your usual stuff. It seems a bit forced.
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16-Nov-03/10:36 AM |
Makes a very good Valentine card.
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19-Nov-03/4:36 PM |
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19-Nov-03/4:38 PM |
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19-Nov-03/4:46 PM |
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19-Nov-03/4:53 PM |
Very Powerful. Your hammer works wonderfully. Pounds right through.
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