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30-Jul-02/3:57 PM |
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| Re: Too Late by ObiWonKn |
30-Jul-02/3:59 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Jul-02/4:02 PM |
Damn that's sexy!
I need a cigarette..
kEEP IT SAUCY GIRL, ONE
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| Re: liberation by silentcat |
30-Jul-02/4:03 PM |
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| Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn |
30-Jul-02/4:12 PM |
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| Re: Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense... |
30-Jul-02/4:31 PM |
I truly appreciate the critque Horus.
Good lookin', and stay up.
Da1
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| Re: Compassion by Kashi |
30-Jul-02/5:11 PM |
it makes you think, but in my opinion( if itmatters at all) it needs more poess and exclusiveness. in other words, " it would be better if the beginning line was developed possibly or if there was more of a revelation in its conclusion, like I've gathered you were shooting for.. anywayz, maybe both would help.
just a though, Da1.and feel free to disect in contrivence over my work, i would be honored.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Jul-02/6:20 PM |
this is hardly a poem let alone even a justifiable stanza.
and what exactly is your angle?!?
And you would specific definitions in a Dictionary as oppose to a Thesaurus, JUST A THOUGHT
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Jul-02/6:39 PM |
I truly am sorry..
my condolences to the family
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| Re: Her Wildfire Addiction by molly |
30-Jul-02/6:43 PM |
A bleeding heart,
is the spark
of this worlds retribution from the dark...
Keep caring girl, Da1....
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