poemranker ::20 most recent comments by shadowaura

Comments byshadowaura, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on Babelfish Poetry (II): Rendu plus Doux (Français) by Geschäftsreise 6 Sep 2003, 7:49 PM
jonas
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 6 Sep 2003, 7:56 PM
vermicular in a very good way
10.
on some deleted poem 5 Sep 2003, 5:08 PM
articulate, beautiful..."looking for clues in a book of long forgotten text"...i do the same every day...a deep, insightful piece, i like.9.
on To a bum, by RealmOfSong 5 Sep 2003, 4:23 PM
a bum indeed..."i've seen what you look like under the stage paint"...that line was perfection
on Snowball by INTRANSIT 5 Sep 2003, 4:31 PM
ah, so much in so words...concise,compact. Kind of slaps you around and pins you down, i like that
on some deleted poem 5 Sep 2003, 5:00 PM
my first thought was along the lines of 'yeah dude rock on for Christ' but i don't think that merely trying to be "good" will get you into heaven..there's no focus on forgiveness of sins...9.
on Only in humility by mozac 21 Sep 2003, 8:25 PM
makes me feel inadequate, somehow
works like this make me wonder why i even bother writing
8/10
on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone 26 Nov 2003, 5:39 PM
hooollldin' onn for Jeeesuss....i can practically hear the music