Poemranker [20 most recent comments by bearhead and replies]

Comments bybearhead, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Malcontent by EAger to Offend 2 Aug 2003, 12:12 PM

I've always found it fun to birth new words. Especially when nobody else knows the meaning.

replying on marriage by bearhead 2 Aug 2003, 12:08 PM

"The church's noon bells sound like a death knell....
His finest day is done......
She vivid in a virgin's gown"

Any better? Thanks for the critique.

replying on marlon by bearhead 2 Aug 2003, 11:54 AM

Yeah, drew a blank on that line - how's "swinging"?