on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
27 Oct 2002, 4:23 PM
this is the stupidest thing i've ever read. really.
on Missing You by psychedelic
27 Oct 2002, 4:30 PM
i like the emotion of this poem. the last line doesn't sound quite right to me, though. try taking another look at it.
on Spellbound by Limness
20 Sep 2002, 4:05 PM
i love the rhythm of this piece. it's excellent.
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
9 Nov 2002, 5:54 AM
You know, I wasn't going to respond to your incredibly moronic comment. But then I saw the truly pathetic attempts at retaliation on *my* poems, and I wanted to clear something up. I do not care. Maybe, if you had any kind of writing talent, grammar, spelling, or intelligence at all, I might respect what you had to say. As it is, however, you came across as a complete idiot who was trying to strike back and gain back some of the tiny bit of ego you had in the first place. So thanks for the laugh, man.