| Re: Snow Storm by tsolantzr |
11-Oct-03/10:40 AM |
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The last line does not fit the rest of the poem very well. A little work on it and this poem would be fairly good.
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| Re: standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil |
11-Oct-03/10:41 AM |
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Like the fact that there is no capitalization. However, I think that if you are not going to have any of that then you should also leave out punctuation. Just my opinion though.
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| Re: Battered moon by revy13 |
11-Oct-03/3:06 PM |
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Like the main idea of this poem. Some of the lines do not flow well enough with the rest.
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| Re: Midnight by jfackf |
11-Oct-03/3:07 PM |
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| Re: Untitled by Piano |
11-Oct-03/3:09 PM |
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Each stanza needs to have more of a flow to the next.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Oct-03/3:15 PM |
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