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3-Aug-02/9:03 PM |
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psst! i think he might find them buried under the violets.
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3-Aug-02/9:15 PM |
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very evocative. very nice. definitely a haiku in spirit.
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| Re: esopus creek by unknown |
5-Aug-02/11:49 AM |
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| Re: loki's end by yarlgrenn |
6-Aug-02/7:18 AM |
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tie me up, tie me down, i was with you 'til the end. 10 for you, for sucking me in. the pleasure, the pain... yes. more like this, please.
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| Re: Self-Rebellion, revised by emilyowey |
6-Aug-02/7:27 AM |
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you had me, up until 'evil plans'. then, it fell apart for me. a 6 for you: 100% for the first half, and a pittance for the rest.
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| Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey |
6-Aug-02/7:36 AM |
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ignorance is bliss, emily, but do you want to be an Eloi? live. feel. endure. rise. the air will taste sweeter, the birds will enchant you, and the ocean will heave your sobs upon the senseless shores...you will harden; you will pulse; you will find new ways to love.
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| Re: Mary Mother by DevilTmptrss |
6-Aug-02/7:43 AM |
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mother goose be damned. there's a new kid in town: DevilTmptrss
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6-Aug-02/8:10 AM |
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yes yes. freeform well used. nicely done.
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6-Aug-02/11:35 AM |
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WTF -=Dark_Angel=-, are you bending over for the lads and lassies, pulling out for the dumbed-down masses? boo, hiss. put it back up.
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| Re: unidentified by <~> |
6-Aug-02/12:44 PM |
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UPBs--unidentified party bruises.
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6-Aug-02/1:03 PM |
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obviuosly, yoda has taught you much.
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6-Aug-02/1:12 PM |
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knock-kneed night / did she put up a fight / when the sun rose red / he tossed his golden head / and the trees did quake / when they saw the dawn break / and the dew-cooled plains / made ready for the strain /of the scorching heat / as they saw the night retreat....
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7-Aug-02/6:42 AM |
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10! ten, i say. again, 10!
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| Re: Unsaid by Revekka |
7-Aug-02/6:51 AM |
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when the unspoken outs, it breaks or it heals. either way, the tension leaves. do it.
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7-Aug-02/12:36 PM |
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them...
or something like that
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7-Aug-02/7:59 PM |
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| Re: Satan wants me for a scarecrow by bondjedi |
7-Aug-02/8:03 PM |
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do i sense a little poem rancor?
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| Re: 22nd Anniversary by Frass |
7-Aug-02/9:07 PM |
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nice, the way 'bitter' has a positive aspect in this piece. shapes my view of her more than any other, except maybe the last
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