on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:53 AM
Religion huh?.....think the astros or the drunk poets changing our world was a better subject now.
on some deleted poem
25 Apr 2003, 4:05 AM
Settle i know its hard being the loser always.......but don't let these idiots discourage you....1 for effort
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 3:59 AM
why didn'u just get pops arressted for child molesting instead of writing this crap?
on some deleted poem
14 Apr 2003, 12:03 PM
Yup this poem sucks and i know ur still running around in circles trying to fuck urself
on Fire And Fuck by Bonehiss
20 Apr 2003, 9:08 AM
Were u molested as a child?
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:30 AM
If the english crap wasn't ennough now we have spanish shit as well. Buenos Aires eh?....I suppose with the country already screwed up u going there wouldn't do much harm. Mayb u could write something for Maradona while ur at it.....prob the best thing from there after sabatini
on some deleted poem
14 May 2003, 2:30 PM
Here take this needle and put it up your ass to remind u that u might b an english major but not a poet......not in this lifetime at least.......lol
on fuck that bitch by Lucifer
14 May 2003, 2:37 PM
So u were the bitch and Aaron ur daddy huh?.............hahaha.....don't worry i know u'll get his ass too.....just don't try to write poetry next time
on some deleted poem
28 Apr 2003, 3:01 AM
Somewhere inside you
Is a mentally demented person
If SARS is so funny
How come the world's a better place
With you not around
Is a mentally demented person
If SARS is so funny
How come the world's a better place
With you not around
on Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5
16 Apr 2003, 8:56 AM
Yup.....hilarious stuff....tho u could have made it more amusing by putting in that crap bout the PROMISED LAND......hahahaha...but what i find even more funny is how stone throwing kid whose lands are occupied by people outta nowhere are labelled as fanatics....hahaha..guess Hitler's attributes rubbed off on some..really something to be proud of and i agree bout the just part too...lol
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:58 AM
the last two stanzas seem like they r from another poem......what the hell is going on?.
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:49 AM
Gosh i love break-ups....at least they're honest.Liked the part bout the heart and facts
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:40 AM
What really amuses me is ppl like u who think revolutions r gonna take place cos of what some drunkard/junkie/both thinks and writes.Wake up.....Action not words. Tho the poem would've really been appropriate mayb 100 years ago
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:24 AM
Joey go overdose o heroin or something before u get strangled by Love.....lol
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:21 AM
Man....first a crappy game like baseball...second a shitty team like the astros....hope part 2 is leess crappy
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:18 AM
The first stanza or most of it sounds like a teen wet dream......but considering ur a high school wannabe poet....can't blame ya..the second stanza is less worse tho....gives u 2 for being a whore
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:02 AM
Stupid's the word alright......will give u a 2 for hoonesty tho
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:44 AM
Why didn't u just kill him and do urself and a lotta other women a gr8 favor?
on some deleted poem
11 Apr 2003, 4:33 AM
Silly Fancy Poem
Invading every country from air,land or sea