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20 most recent comments by asimpleman
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regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/3:59 AM
why didn'u just get pops arressted for child molesting instead of writing this crap?
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:02 AM
Stupid's the word alright......will give u a 2 for hoonesty tho
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:18 AM
The first stanza or most of it sounds like a teen wet dream......but considering ur a high school wannabe poet....can't blame ya..the second stanza is less worse tho....gives u 2 for being a whore
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:21 AM
Man....first a crappy game like baseball...second a shitty team like the astros....hope part 2 is leess crappy
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:24 AM
Joey go overdose o heroin or something before u get strangled by Love.....lol
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:30 AM
If the english crap wasn't ennough now we have spanish shit as well. Buenos Aires eh?....I suppose with the country already screwed up u going there wouldn't do much harm. Mayb u could write something for Maradona while ur at it.....prob the best thing from there after sabatini
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:33 AM
Silly Fancy Poem
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:40 AM
What really amuses me is ppl like u who think revolutions r gonna take place cos of what some drunkard/junkie/both thinks and writes.Wake up.....Action not words. Tho the poem would've really been appropriate mayb 100 years ago
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:44 AM
Why didn't u just kill him and do urself and a lotta other women a gr8 favor?
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:49 AM
Gosh i love break-ups....at least they're honest.Liked the part bout the heart and facts
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:53 AM
Religion huh?.....think the astros or the drunk poets changing our world was a better subject now.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Apr-03/4:58 AM
the last two stanzas seem like they r from another poem......what the hell is going on?.
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Apr-03/12:03 PM
Yup this poem sucks and i know ur still running around in circles trying to fuck urself
Re: Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5 16-Apr-03/8:56 AM
Yup.....hilarious stuff....tho u could have made it more amusing by putting in that crap bout the PROMISED LAND......hahahaha...but what i find even more funny is how stone throwing kid whose lands are occupied by people outta nowhere are labelled as fanatics....hahaha..guess Hitler's attributes rubbed off on some..really something to be proud of and i agree bout the just part too...lol
Re: Fire And Fuck by Bonehiss 20-Apr-03/9:08 AM
Were u molested as a child?
regarding some deleted poem... 25-Apr-03/4:05 AM
Settle i know its hard being the loser always.......but don't let these idiots discourage you....1 for effort
Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT 25-Apr-03/4:12 AM
We r the idiots that forever be
Invading every country from air,land or sea

regarding some deleted poem... 28-Apr-03/3:01 AM
Somewhere inside you
Is a mentally demented person
If SARS is so funny
How come the world's a better place
With you not around
regarding some deleted poem... 14-May-03/2:30 PM
Here take this needle and put it up your ass to remind u that u might b an english major but not a poet......not in this lifetime at least.......lol
Re: fuck that bitch by Lucifer 14-May-03/2:37 PM
So u were the bitch and Aaron ur daddy huh?.............hahaha.....don't worry i know u'll get his ass too.....just don't try to write poetry next time


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