Re: a comment on Pine by andrewjthomas	30-Apr-03/5:31 PM
cool, care to elaborate? thanks
Re: a comment on sunday morning precarious by andrewjthomas	29-Apr-03/5:05 PM
yeah, i need to go back and edit the poem to make that clearer... we didn't fuck... we were both staying in the same apt one night with mutual friends... i woke up early, she thought no one was awake yet... :)
Re: a comment on Brother by andrewjthomas	29-Apr-03/4:54 PM
thanks... my only gripe is that you lose the formatting here i wrote this for my brother's 30th b-day and there are exactly 30 lines and each line grows a syllable (first line is one, last line has 30) and because of the line wrapping, you don't see that so clearly
Re: a comment on The Blooding by Mr Pig	29-Apr-03/3:38 PM
i'm gonna have to agree with you here for instance, why even state the last three lines? you should trust the reader to infer all of that (i do have to say "texture of black jelly" is an inspired line)
Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike	29-Apr-03/3:06 PM
amen, but you forgot the "goth" sub-genre... where common themes and words include "blood, darkness, soul, cutting"