| Re: To You by Cha no Onna |
19-May-02/10:53 PM |
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This reminds me far too much of things I've seen and is well done. It stumbles a little in the 4th stanza, but nicely done overall.
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19-May-02/11:41 PM |
Considering that you posted this anonymously, that tells us quite a bit about you, ne?
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I suggest that everyone be required to have at least read good poetry before trying to write good poetry. Because most of what is on here is pathetically self-indulgent juvenalia.
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| Re: Cliche by ifni |
21-May-02/11:28 AM |
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22-Aug-02/11:10 PM |
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I'm not really certain I understand this one.
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| Re: For fun by Cha no Onna |
22-Aug-02/11:11 PM |
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This is downright cute! Got a chuckle out of me.
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| Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
10-Sep-02/11:19 PM |
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Interesting imagery. I'm not certain that I follow it completely, but I do like it.
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| Re: The Bicycle Rider by [mojo] |
10-Sep-02/11:20 PM |
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I must admit... it's not quite what I pictured with the drug references.
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| Re: Love Cuts by ifni |
10-Sep-02/11:47 PM |
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10-Sep-02/11:49 PM |
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This feels like it's starting to lead you somewhere and then just kind of drops off into oblivion.
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| Re: Garden by ifni |
20-Sep-02/12:26 AM |
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Wish I had seen this one earlier. It's just neat!
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| Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
28-May-04/6:23 PM |
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I'd be willing to bet that at some point in your life, you worked at a renaissance faire! Not bad work over all. -8-
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