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9-Jan-03/5:22 PM |
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I can't quite see the veins on its marble buttocks. Perhaps, i need my spectacles.
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9-Jan-03/5:30 PM |
Yes, I have seen this once before.
When Count Vlad impaled the Turks.
Thank you Bachus for the warning.
I will keep keep it in mind.
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| Re: I wish by trisha |
9-Jan-03/5:35 PM |
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9-Jan-03/5:53 PM |
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You could improve the power of the nouns and adjectives by opening a thesaurus and a dictionary..the structure and theme, and the arc are fine. I will give you a ten to get you back to five.
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9-Jan-03/6:53 PM |
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Actually, that's a hello kitty shot. Lets sell it to Japan. I want 15%. And Half of the frachises royalties.
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| Re: Kindling by <~> |
9-Jan-03/7:03 PM |
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Better a wood stove than a burn barrel. Very well titled, and delivered.
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| Re: lost love by cherish |
10-Jan-03/2:12 PM |
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indubitably..oh, you meant horus horus..my bad. still, i do indeed agree wholeheartedly without hesitation.
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| Re: I gots me a postcard, motherfucker. by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
12-Jan-03/3:08 PM |
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12-Jan-03/3:32 PM |
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my freak devotion , adding of course freak for perfect pentameter. nice name by the way.
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