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6-Jan-03/5:27 AM |
Made me want to hang myself..
Perhaps cuckoo instead of crow: the most selfish of all birds.
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| Re: Exiting Shadows by Caducus |
6-Jan-03/5:38 AM |
You paint fire and hell on a canvas
of black.
Let down only by repetition of "forever", "demons" and "Shadows"
Do not think me disingenuous, I enjoyed the indulgence.
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| Re: The bouchon by Bachus |
7-Jan-03/12:51 AM |
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Can't help but visualise the corking effect, have a 7
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| Re: The bouchon by Bachus |
7-Jan-03/12:52 AM |
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Can't help but visualise the corking effect, have a 7
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7-Jan-03/1:32 AM |
"He wears his solitude about him"
is superb. Bit confused about the blossoming rosebushes in the seemingly winter theme (i've probably missed the point) All the same, take a 7
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7-Jan-03/1:54 AM |
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Beautiful. 9. I knew all along that he isn't there.
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9-Jan-03/8:01 AM |
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I hope they get cataracts and bump into each other
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14-Jan-03/7:03 AM |
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11-Feb-03/2:08 AM |
Guilt is a double edged sword my freind, remember that that the feeling of guilt comes after doing something full of joy, freedom or just sheer guttural animal instinct.
If you didn't feel it then you are nothing.
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11-Feb-03/7:04 AM |
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I can kind of itentify here !
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| Re: The Tuesday Dogs by Caducus |
11-Feb-03/7:07 AM |
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Oh i liked this one. Dead dog walking !!!!!
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