| Re: the abandoned sea by crin |
8-Jul-02/5:38 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Aug-02/9:19 AM |
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could be better. never stop trying :o)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Aug-02/9:22 AM |
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see? i told ya it'd be better! this is very nice... i can imagine the scene unfolding. keep it up :o)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Aug-02/9:24 AM |
whew that's pretty hair-raising. did she die in here?
nweiz take note of the spelling :o)
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| Re: Happy Birthday by psychedelic |
5-Aug-02/9:25 AM |
re: not all men are the same!!!!!!! i like your work.
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yup, sure. guess i just got a lil too passionate on some bad experience ;o)
anyway, thanks!
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| Re: Unsaid by Revekka |
7-Aug-02/2:36 AM |
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it's ok. I'll give it a 9.
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| Re: The Girl Who Wasn't Me by psychedelic |
13-Aug-02/5:44 AM |
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| Re: Remember by psychedelic |
13-Aug-02/6:11 AM |
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not all of them are for the same person. nor all of them based from my own life. sometimes i write about what other people felt.
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| Re: Broken by psychedelic |
13-Aug-02/6:13 AM |
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all you want is to be happy yet you are denied.
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