Re: Dear Lord by simone_girard	8-Jul-03/10:28 AM
wow....i like it, i cant understand why it is in the 'worst' place! Very confusing to me..I give it a 10
Re: The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom	8-Jul-03/10:26 AM
Um....Funny....Has a point, but....
Re: The boy who shot birds by Bachus	10-May-03/7:37 AM
''a homerun of shit'' is some of what you said to me and i am tired of your bullshit bachus I may not be as good of a writer or maybe not even half of a good writer that you may be but i am damn well certain of one thing, i dont like to be told that my poems are shit i would rather have it in a ranking rather than in words. I came to poemranker because i thought 'hey since im ONLY 12 and have nothing better to do why not enter my poems for rankings?' But as it turns out i would be hated by many so called poem wrietrs such as yourself. I try to deal with it, but since my in-matureness seems to control everything i am going to handle it the way i see fit. I would normally just cuss you out like any other normail 12 year old kid but i am not going to stoop to your level of using mean comments.(maybe i will) As your title says, the boy who shot birds, I wish it had been the birds who shot boys. You deserve every bit of what i am very pathetically trying to tell you. I think you are shit for telling me that and if i may say it just once more: My poems i like to call them my art. I call them that because thats what i want to call them dammit! My opinion has no sense of appeal to you anyway so i am going to wrap this up with a simple goodbye and if you ever think of writing comments like that on my poems i would think twice because if you think 3 of my poems are worth shit then there is no ned for you toread nay other of my poems! goodbye for now my poor soul
Re: Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8	9-May-03/1:27 PM
oookk i know i dont have any room to talk since i havent logged in for like about 3 or 4 months but this takes the cake for the best/worst poem i ahve ever read. i am not sure wether to all it good or wether to call it bad because im sure of this: If i rate it 10 and say it is a great poem, on one of my ratings im sure to get from horus: ''you dont know what great it you are just some little bitch who still attends school and you cant write for jack so if i were you i would stop writing right now''. and im sure if i put something bad like: god horus your poems suck maybe you should stop writing you are just some gay fag who writes about his time on the street begging for mone to pay for his hospital bill because he got aids from some 'fag' on the street i am sure to get this kind of response on one of my poems horus: ''u little whore it is none of your business what i do and who i am'' and just on and on and on and on until finally i have to leave poemrankers or i have to do something drastic to make him/her stop so after thinking of all the possiblities of what could happen to me in the future for putting a negative/good comment i will rate him a 5 for it is between 10 and 1. Hopefully he dosent take the time to read my pointless comment and just browses around through the other ones and dosent think twice to read mine! I can only hope.
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	9-May-03/1:12 PM
good but lacks potential....i shouldn;t be talking but i know how it feels to be put down because of writing but then again who the hell are people to be judging your 'art' as i would call it. all the poems i write i call them my art...why you ask well..because i have no other thing to do and i write my feeling as i feel them. They may not make sense to some people but to others they understand what i was thinking at the moment of creating the poem and they can relate to me..and those who cant relate to me they give me bad ratings..so think of it thise way i can connect with you on this one but dont think im going to let you get away with a 10 next time!
Re: blockbuster by bondjedi	9-May-03/1:07 PM
o god and i thought i sucked