poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ecargo (481-500) and replies

Comments byecargo, 481–500 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Worldly Wise by anitawit 9 Nov 2002, 5:33 PM
An interesting exercise in imagined dialect--"doth" in line 4 seems off; maybe "do" would better serve?
on Persephone by Lynn 8 Nov 2002, 9:24 PM
This is great, a hilarious retelling, dead on.