on Fields of Deception by rick
23 Oct 2002, 9:40 PM
I love it. I felt every line, it seems you put your sol into it. I would love to know your inspiration for this one?
on Another poem by Mutant_X
23 Oct 2002, 8:18 PM
Spelling mistakes and typographical errors should not be made on a piece that is being submitted on the internet. I kinda like the concept but words aren't as vivid as they could be. You need to be a little (sp) stronger in the middle of the poem.
on Sisters of mercy by strider1
23 Oct 2002, 8:11 PM
Very good poem, contradictive statements kept me motioning but the last three lines put the whole poem in perspective.
on Sisters of mercy by strider1
23 Oct 2002, 8:11 PM
Very good poem, contradictive statements kept me motioning but the last three lines put the whole poem in perspective.
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
22 Oct 2002, 11:15 AM
this is beautiful