| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
22-Oct-02/11:15 AM |
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| Re: Sisters of mercy by strider1 |
23-Oct-02/8:11 PM |
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Very good poem, contradictive statements kept me motioning but the last three lines put the whole poem in perspective.
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| Re: Sisters of mercy by strider1 |
23-Oct-02/8:11 PM |
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Very good poem, contradictive statements kept me motioning but the last three lines put the whole poem in perspective.
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| Re: Another poem by Mutant_X |
23-Oct-02/8:18 PM |
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Spelling mistakes and typographical errors should not be made on a piece that is being submitted on the internet. I kinda like the concept but words aren't as vivid as they could be. You need to be a little (sp) stronger in the middle of the poem.
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| Re: Fields of Deception by rick |
23-Oct-02/9:40 PM |
I love it. I felt every line, it seems you put your sol into it. I would love to know your inspiration for this one?
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