| Re: Lucky Me by savannah |
16-Sep-02/3:11 PM |
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Aww that is really sweet! i like that one it has good rythm and meanig
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| Re: a prayer for grief by mitchski |
24-Sep-02/1:54 PM |
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I like it its my style of poem. Good language and I get your point. This poem containts a bit of feeling like mine do. A poet could come of you yet.
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| Re: the child that never was by mitchski |
24-Sep-02/1:58 PM |
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painfull yet joyfull. depressing yet happy
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| Re: she did not by mitchski |
24-Sep-02/2:02 PM |
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I like this one alot! its has alot of feeling and character in it it kinda tells a story of your younger life i get the feeling this is a poem from the heart not just made up
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| Re: lost by mitchski |
24-Sep-02/2:05 PM |
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this has lost of hiden meaning in this . prettyfull
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| Re: tobago, my tara by mitchski |
24-Sep-02/2:07 PM |
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this ones seems happier than the rest like the joy after the pain
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| Re: whats love by da_dark_wan |
24-Sep-02/2:12 PM |
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