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whats love (Free verse) by da_dark_wan
love is a great feeling the affects of E will be no match for it you???ll be on a high 24/7 yet it can cause so much pain the feeling will be great life will be the best you will want nothing to change until your heart is broken the hurt will be unbearable then life will have no meaning love is a risk it is the feelings shared between two people There is nothing else they can do If the feelings between these people change One will be hurt, one will be lost Some one will feel guilty For the pain just they just caused

Up the ladder: the bond we share
Down the ladder: life

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10840
Posted: August 22, 2002 3:09 AM PDT; Last modified: August 22, 2002 3:09 AM PDT
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[9] Artificial_Sweetner @ 213.122.93.223 | 24-Sep-02/2:12 PM | Reply
very pretty!
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