regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jun-07/5:07 AM
Mostly I'd just say you need to proofread, at least in the last paragraph/stanza. doesn't - miserable - lives - drowning How-ever I do like the subtle rhyme scheme, and how it's written a little like a story. Grief might seem like it intensifies, but in time time will heal. Oh the irony, but it does make sense. => Jess
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jun-07/5:11 AM
Although this isn't senryu, it's pretty alright. What does "braying" mean though? Should it be "playing"? Also, bollocks isn't actually a form of poetry, they were saying they didn't like your poem. => Jess (ps, small world, but at least before I rate your comment right now, one of my poems is directly below you on the rankings)
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jun-07/5:13 AM
Life as conveyed through the illusion of satyric toilet humour. Why yes, I think I like it
Re: Let's Grovel For Jesus And Fight The Naughty Satan! by Sing4Jesus!	3-Jun-07/5:15 AM
Although I can see why you'd get rated lowly, I also don't see how it's that bad as a poem. The religious nuts have to pull their heads out of their arses and realise you're supposed to rate a poem on it's merits, not your own personal beliefs. => Jess
Re: behind the banister by FreeFormFixation	6-Jun-07/1:48 AM
Is calico a cat or a dog? Albeit you've got hopeed instead of hopped, at least, but I like your style. I guess I like a bit of skittish madness in the form of freeform, lol. Come to think of it, I've never been a fan of form (because I can't master it myself ;)) => Jess
Re: save a class now by FreeFormFixation	6-Jun-07/1:51 AM
I might have to favouritise you so I know where to go when I can come back (whence I'm not cramming for exams). I like it. It's cheeky. On a more formal note I think it detereorated from "And roger was weeping," but I wouldn't change anything if it'll mean taking away from the general feel. Haha, awesome. => Jess
Re: Bitter by Ranger	6-Jun-07/1:56 AM
I love the rhyme, it's almost hypnotic... and I don't usually like triple entendres. It so eerie in the empty sense, regret in the third person, just a hint of bitter. I like this very much. => Jess