Re: a comment on With a smile and a light heart... by Nepanthe	29-Oct-08/6:11 PM
Your typemanship has been capsized, please flip over, and dial again. This is a recording.
Re: a comment on Coffee or Love by Nepanthe	6-Sep-08/12:21 PM
Yes; comfort, indulgence and addiction.
Re: a comment on Absurd Robot by Nepanthe	12-Mar-08/5:39 AM
You are self actualizing, each of your steps are exacting, yours is a limited pace in which you know your place. I can mean anyone can't it? Except the people that the words don't apply to. By saying I, I do not distract the listener from my presence which would make them more aware of me, I is easier to empathize with as it is all of our positions in life.
Re: a comment on Goodnight by Nepanthe	12-Mar-08/5:09 AM
http://www.myspace.com/monstersinnocence It's the first song currently, I already see that retreating needs to be changed to receding. I have changed "Wave all that I will...." to "Thrash all that I will, I'm stuck in my place". If you have anymore insight as to improving the lyrics after listening please tell me.
Re: a comment on Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	25-Feb-08/6:51 AM
Personally I think the largest problem with this is that the mentality comes across as Christian rather than Sufi, and she's a bad Christian at that. Gives a bad taste in the mouth as far as passive fatalism goes.
Re: a comment on Her Mitts by Nepanthe	21-Mar-07/6:30 AM
It works now.
Re: a comment on Her Mitts by Nepanthe	13-Mar-07/10:29 PM
..this may take me longer than I thought...
Re: Herencia Latina by Ranger	13-Mar-07/9:18 PM
This is beautiful and it flows well, matching the theme to the structure as you did keeps it from sounding repetitive. Without knowing it at first I could feel a guitar in my hands... the strings along my fingertips and a current of song.
Re: a comment on Her Mitts by Nepanthe	13-Mar-07/2:56 PM
Yes, I'll work on it later tonight, and repost.
Re: a comment on Her Mitts by Nepanthe	13-Mar-07/2:23 PM
Is that better?
Re: a comment on Her Mitts by Nepanthe	13-Mar-07/2:16 PM
Sounds like too many syllables. take out the of and the last two lines match up, 8 and 8.
Re: a comment on Her Mitts by Nepanthe	13-Mar-07/2:14 PM
Hm, I'm still not sure of the 'of'.
Re: a comment on Her Mitts by Nepanthe	13-Mar-07/1:57 PM
Do you think this revision is alright, or should I change it back? and say 'mitts of her own'.
Re: a comment on Her Mitts by Nepanthe	13-Mar-07/1:35 PM
Heh, yeah I see it. I felt the second paragraph was weak. I should work on it, a punch to the colon's far too violent for a pair of soft fluffy mitts. Thanks : )