Re: Getting Burned by sliver	15-Jul-09/3:30 PM
I like the idea. No expert here but with some tweaking it could flow better
Re: quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog	14-Jul-09/5:18 AM
I like it. NOt sure about last two lines. I struggle with them too.
Re: How to sleep sitting up by Bachus	14-Jul-09/5:16 AM
Brilliant, loved it!
Re: Firestorm by Dovina	18-Feb-07/5:02 PM
As pointless as taking "poemranker" too seriously.
Re: forever it was you by the indign	15-Jul-06/2:39 AM
An obvious poem but It doesnt mean I didnt enjoy it. nice