on I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Aug 2006, 12:12 PM
Why do you have the = signs and the _ sign in your name? And what is the "PI" for?
on Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Aug 2006, 12:14 PM
I liked this one. Some of your stuff is very clever. Some is not. Like the curate's egg.
on The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Aug 2006, 12:15 PM
I don't know the source of this one. And i don't like the exclamation mark at the end. It's unnecessary.
on I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Aug 2006, 12:11 PM
This is very good indeed. Eric would be very proud of you were he sufficiently with us.
Bucharest is not as exciting as Newcastle of course.
Bucharest is not as exciting as Newcastle of course.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 3:13 AM
One hates to be rude, but this looks like puerile gibberish to me. Sadly I can only score it 0/10. It deserves a minus.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 3:15 AM
Banal and trite. At least no spelling mistakes.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 3:17 AM
This is quite amusing in spite of the shoddy grammar. Of course, the writer-hero is a dim ignorant git who cannot appreciate Milton. I assume it's autobiographical. I'll be generous and give it 6/10 as I smiled.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 3:21 AM
I forgot to mention that it is common knowledge among students of English literature that Milton's grave was famously desecrated by grave robbers. Thus, your stupidity in coming over in the first place is compounded. You would have been better advised to go an desecrate Abey Lincoln's grave - the guy who was so thick he couldn't even go the the theatre without getting killed.
on Dale Winton's Buttocks by Ya Kid K
13 Aug 2006, 3:24 AM
The first seven lines are OK. The last line is trash. Here is my revised and improved 2nd stanza for you.
Some say they are too soft.
Some say they're rather rugged.
Some say they're strangely clammy.
Especially after being buggered.
PS Who is Dale Winton?
Some say they are too soft.
Some say they're rather rugged.
Some say they're strangely clammy.
Especially after being buggered.
PS Who is Dale Winton?
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
13 Aug 2006, 3:30 AM
You are talented, dear. But this goes on too long. I have written a similar poem based upon diarhheoa in church. Here is the link for you:
http://www.allpoetry.com/poem/1189094
http://www.allpoetry.com/poem/1189094
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 5:45 PM
Boring garbage. Why not stay in Cambridge? And why not drown yourself in the Cam?
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 5:46 PM
Uneducated drivel. As per usual.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 5:47 PM
tripe.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 5:48 PM
Utter drivel. Had you considered a lobotomy?
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 5:49 PM
Longwinded horsepiss.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 5:49 PM
Urine.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 5:50 PM
Tits.
on some deleted poem
13 Aug 2006, 5:50 PM
Pretentious juvenile American horsedung.
on Dustin by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:53 PM
Illiterate garbage. Why not get educated?
on My Wish by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:54 PM
Not very good.