| Re: a comment on Boundaries by Dhanesh M Kumar |
13-Mar-06/8:17 AM |
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Please see my explanations
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| Re: a comment on Boundaries by Dhanesh M Kumar |
13-Mar-06/8:09 AM |
The theme in this poem is about freedom. I wrote this when I saw a mother trying to control her child who was screaming at the top of itâs voice as his mother stopped him from coming out of a room.
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| Re: a comment on Breakfast by Dhanesh M Kumar |
11-Mar-06/7:32 AM |
The war started with the question of "weapons of mass destruction". Have they found anything that was a threat to U.S or U.K?
I am of the opinion that they could have eliminated or atleast silenced Sadam without a war. In that case the oil wells could not have been controlled.It's here that question of oil arises.
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| Re: a comment on A HANGMAN'S MOANING by Dhanesh M Kumar |
6-Mar-06/3:48 AM |
Hi Richa,
Thank you for the comments.But I feel that your suggestions might hamper the rhythm of the poem.
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| Re: a comment on A HANGMAN'S MOANING by Dhanesh M Kumar |
6-Mar-06/3:40 AM |
Hi Ranger,
Thank you for the comment. The penultimate line explains the helplessness of the hangman.
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