on Everything That You've Ever Wanted by drnick
20 Feb 2006, 8:14 PM
And if we obtain everything we wanted, ~ yes, how boring that would be... the expression, "money doesn't buy everything" derives from that, but even more so - if every wish comes true, then what is tomorrow for. I enjoyed the ponderings this poem brought to mind.
on Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger
20 Feb 2006, 6:24 PM
There is an internal and line ending rhyme that keeps the river flow of this going. Nice indeed. The only line that I stumbled on was this:
“With breeze they softly are stirred”
With “freeze” right at the end going into “with breeze” something didn’t catch. Over all though, enjoyed.
“With breeze they softly are stirred”
With “freeze” right at the end going into “with breeze” something didn’t catch. Over all though, enjoyed.
on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger
20 Feb 2006, 6:15 PM
A touch of fairytale dreams and real life entanglements, this is well rounded, including the sense of humor. Enjoyed!