| Re: Everything That You've Ever Wanted by drnick |
20-Feb-06/8:14 PM |
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And if we obtain everything we wanted, ~ yes, how boring that would be... the expression, "money doesn't buy everything" derives from that, but even more so - if every wish comes true, then what is tomorrow for. I enjoyed the ponderings this poem brought to mind.
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| Re: Blackbird & the Everlasting Dream by Ranger |
20-Feb-06/6:24 PM |
There is an internal and line ending rhyme that keeps the river flow of this going. Nice indeed. The only line that I stumbled on was this:
âWith breeze they softly are stirredâ
With âfreezeâ right at the end going into âwith breezeâ something didnât catch. Over all though, enjoyed.
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| Re: Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger |
20-Feb-06/6:15 PM |
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A touch of fairytale dreams and real life entanglements, this is well rounded, including the sense of humor. Enjoyed!
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