on In Vein by nentwined
9 Sep 2002, 7:35 PM
really enjoyed the second stanza and the basic flow between the first and second..nice work
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
9 Sep 2002, 7:39 PM
regardless of how it is categorized..which is rather unimportant in my mind..i really enjoy the subject and diction used. very nice job 9/10