on Freud Spoke Of A Mother's Tongue, But I Interpret Dreams by Ranger
30 Apr 2006, 12:11 AM
I can safely say I have no idea what this poem is about. That being said though the imagery is amazing. So even if I was completely lost almost instantly, I still enjoyed every line I read. Great job.
on We Were Burnouts by jessicazee
13 Sep 2005, 10:49 PM
Pretty good. Needs to be structured a little though. Some grammatical errors. But overall, different and well written.
on Visiting My Heart by drnick
9 Sep 2006, 10:20 PM
Amazing imagery. Some of the best I've read in a poem. Very well written.
on With Old Light by Ranger
9 Sep 2006, 10:27 PM
I think I'm a sucker for good imagery. Very well done.
on Peter by Wakeboarder20
4 Oct 2006, 11:06 PM
Well, I revised the poem again. Now it's nothing like it was before. I had reread the story about Jesus walking on the water to a group of fishermen and peter walking out to Jesus. I wanted to do something with that story but couldn't think of what. Right now it's just a straight re-telling of the story. I'm going to try to think of what I can do to change it a little and get some message across.