Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 |
15-Sep-05/4:47 PM |
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Re: Unbroken Horses by Caducus |
16-Sep-05/9:57 AM |
I liked
when she died face down
on fresh linen.
'Beauty' was shot in the hind leg
tried to stand three times but fell.
But all in all not enough insight or images that will stick in my mind. It reads like hopelessly melancholic list of how crap things are. "Grandma's dead, I'm a bastard, Grandpa shot my horse, Grandpa's dead"
Perhaps just focus on one of these.
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Re: loud clubbin by ay deee |
16-Sep-05/10:33 AM |
The relationship between thick cut rug and invisible trousers is intriguing. Do you wear the rug like a large conical skirt?
I enjoyed this.
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Re: nicholson by ay deee |
19-Sep-05/1:08 PM |
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