Re: Goldmunds Slut Fiasco. by SupremeDreamer	9-Mar-06/8:11 PM
Not sure about this as a whole - but sure of it's power by degrees. Pretty cool snack!
Re: Homophobic Self-Help Poem. (For the men who drive a mustang) by SupremeDreamer	9-Mar-06/7:59 PM
I like this - most people won't get it - thinking it quite vulgar or invidious. This has a raw dark art to it that reads (and sounds) beautifully.
Re: You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger	9-Mar-06/7:03 PM
Very clever bit of prose here - I like it a lot. Could use just a few less words. "Top-hat velvet" and "soft-shoe shine", "where time is a circle" (and others) read (and sound) so well. Good job young poet! Please keep writing.
Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	26-Jun-05/11:46 AM
The first 14 lines sound like my 10 year old, spewing fourth awkward taunts - the rest is great.
Re: Gothic by zodiac	26-Jun-05/11:39 AM
yawn - like a third grader's rumination.
Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	26-Jun-05/11:34 AM
Seems this site is still hollow rude and talentless! If you wallow in trivial shit - you'll always put fourth trivial shit. GROW UP!