on Nothing And Everything by DaRkMoOnLuVeR
5 Mar 2005, 9:08 AM
interesting and i like some of the word choice especially at the end, however it often at times seems just a bit forced and im not quite sure i get the purpose of this poem - 6 -
on What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR
5 Mar 2005, 9:10 AM
uch, no offence but this is terribly terribly cliched, and i dont feel it is all that well written - 4 -
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2005, 9:15 AM
- i am not a very big fan - reminds the rhyming seems quite forced and this reminds me of something a 12 year old might write - 5 -
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2005, 9:21 AM
its okay - i like the theme and some of the lines in the beginning are nice - but some are also akward - 7 -
on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle
6 Mar 2005, 3:42 PM
its a shame when a group of poets cannot stand a contrarian view, and then on top of it, completely miss the point of a poem
-emyln
-emyln
on an early discovery (reworking) by richa
7 Mar 2005, 3:59 PM
i like it - 9 -
-emlyn
-emlyn
on Letter Harmony by webguy
7 Mar 2005, 4:10 PM
i love this - 10 -
-emlyn
-emlyn
on Doesn't Hurt Me by Miggy
17 Aug 2005, 4:35 PM
I'm not trying to sound like an elitist because it isn't bad, it just doesn't sound unlike anything I've heard before,
if you get what I'm saying
if you get what I'm saying