Re: domination by midnight	25-Feb-05/7:32 PM
I really like enjoyed this poem :) Very nice
Re: A Song for Laura by somemorepoetry	28-Feb-05/5:06 PM
The first stanza kind of sounds a little forced and parts dont really make sense.
Re: The Path by hummers86	2-Mar-05/7:01 PM
stanza 4 is a little off tempo and some of the rhymes feel forced - like life and stride and made and aid. But overall, I enjoyed it. :)
Re: The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp	7-Mar-05/3:45 PM
reminds me of a poem I wrote :) Very nice
Re: The Muses by crooked_smile	7-Mar-05/4:13 PM
That has to be the longest poem about not being able to write a poem I've ever read.