Re: Someday by moonlightdance	24-Jun-04/7:53 PM
This isn't that great as a poem, but for some reason I like it. Would be better, methinks, as a lyric.
Re: Walk with you by moonlightdance	24-Jun-04/7:55 PM
Lose the rhymes and this isn't bad.
Re: Flower of Lebanon by donmiguel1960	24-Jun-04/8:03 PM
Some of the rhymes are good and some seem very forced (i.e.- sun/shun). Other than that, not bad.
Re: Tulips for Penelope by zenhaircut	24-Jun-04/8:04 PM
You had me at vodka.
Re: PATIENCE by jroday	24-Jun-04/8:56 PM
LOL
Re: Pathetic by Miggy	24-Jun-04/8:59 PM
yep, sure is.