Re: Bizarre Practices by longships	20-Aug-02/10:16 PM
I'd have to agree... Rhyming can be used tastefully and rhythmically, and it can be overused. It sounds like a 3rd grade song that you use to sing while jumping rope.
Re: cold sonnet by <~>	21-Aug-02/3:53 PM
It's like I can see it. Good job :)
Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying	21-Aug-02/9:31 PM
Spelling isnt that bad, but the subject is cliche. Sounds like a pop song/nursery rhyme. It's a whole lot better than the other poems here in the worst section, though
Re: Untitled by unknown	21-Aug-02/10:47 PM
Not personally my taste in poems, bu tI'm not really a romantic :)