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Dovina replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 7:13 PM
Energetic Nutty Truckdriver
INTRANSIT replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 7:10 PM
Emergency Nudicle Technician?
some deleted user replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 7:10 PM
Rubber ducky alright with you? Nobody can make a rubber duckie whack like me. I had just one discussion with Zodiac. It ranged from dykes to totems with a few niggaz thrown in on the side to make it semi-actual. I assume you mean Dovina. (discussion; not the dyke)
Dovina replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 7:08 PM
You need another margarita to figure this out.
INTRANSIT replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 7:07 PM
Which one?
Dovina replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 7:05 PM
He's like a little obnoxious brother. Kinda cute in a sordid way.
INTRANSIT replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 7:02 PM
Dunno. Like 'im though. And 'mage and anyone who'll whip me like the bad poet I am. I'm a maso-chiste.
Dovina replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 7:00 PM
I vaguely remember pulling that Derringer trigger. How's the Arab doing anyway, haven't heard from him lately.
INTRANSIT replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 6:57 PM
It's just some junk I thought up on the road after seein one of the many "discussions" between you and Zodiac. You can flog me with a squeaky toy. If that's your thing.
Dovina on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 6:53 PM
Commas mis-spaced, but otherwise a tough ride.
some deleted user replying on Star Studded Supermarket by [mojo] 26 May 2005, 6:53 PM
No, it's not funny. It would be funny had Kate Moss preached the Joe Pesci Look and had the names of the stars been spelled even more wrong.
INTRANSIT replying on Coffined by Dovina 26 May 2005, 6:53 PM
Neither does poetry if you think about it. "If a nation's literature declines,the nation atrophies and decays." Ezra Pound from A-B-C of reading Yes. Pound. Again.
Dovina replying on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 6:52 PM
ENT = Emergency Medical Technician
some deleted user replying on Coffined by Dovina 26 May 2005, 6:46 PM
Ah... [brainless smilie]
Dovina replying on Coffined by Dovina 26 May 2005, 6:42 PM
See comment below.
Dovina replying on Coffined by Dovina 26 May 2005, 6:42 PM
No, it is a failure as poem. Thanks for trying to interpret, but when four good poets fail to understand what I was talking about, it can only mean that I failed to be clear. The body is complete because the life is complete. It is abolished because the life is gone, a no-breather because that leads to the punch word – no-brainrer – which has two meanings – a dead brain and a decision that requires little thought.
some deleted user on Coffined by Dovina 26 May 2005, 6:10 PM
I wonder, is this really such a poem failure? It's intriguing and the language is quite rich. If this is about someone who is helping himself going down the drain, it's an original view. Although I get the impression that it is not the body that is 'abolished', but the brain. Damned those capitals again! Because do I read: 'I ask what good that body is, complete (and) abolished' or 'I ask what good that body is; complete (but) abolished'?
some deleted user on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT 26 May 2005, 5:52 PM
<< For she'd shot him you see >> Well...suppose you got a Derringer's barrel poked in the eye and the trigger gets pulled and you scream: "I'm shot! I'm shot!", know what bystanders would say? "That's obvious, isn't it?" Perhaps the title should be 'The absurdity of the obvious'? But what I suspect is, I don't know what an E.M.T. is, so I'm probably missing the point. If so, forgive me.
Not really. By the way, I've recently been reading about the role of ladies in computer science. My favourite historicum is that in the 19th century there was a mathematical journal called the "Ladies Diary." Apparently it was just for ladies!
Just tit for tat really. Make a comment, ignore the poem. Irritating, isn't it? in non-evaluable lambda sort of way.