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Date Rape Gang Bang (Haiku) by Bachus

So you're a virgin Would you like to meet the guys? No means yes you slut!

Y2kSlamPoet 28-Aug-03/4:47 PM
While searching the comments section for victimes and opportunities to be funny, or to be insultive, or whatever, you know i have a basic egocentric need to stroke my pride..

i found this! you still bother to sift through old works and comment on them, and vote zeros in anger.. i know you are mad, being rejected and all.. and being pounded into the soil.. by numerouse attackers.. but you need to move on..

im going to speculate, but does being bipolar cause you to lash out and persue obsessions of revenge?.. can you never turn your back on old wounds, must you constantly peel those scabs?..

your going to bleed to death.




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