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Whales (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

A whale's suicide. Beaching herself with eyes wide. Cleaner than Ocean. Dry docked whale boat. Captain strikes match off his leg. Leaning on that bone. Boy visits sea world. Falls into Killer Whale tank. The whales save his life.

horus8 5-Mar-03/1:49 AM
Why is flawed two? say it. does it sound like two to you. Would whaled be two too?




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