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My cousin's baby sitter. (Haiku) by Bachus

Sunshine was fifteen when i popped her ripe cherry. The sunset bled well. Rollicking i sang as i came, and came, and came. Filled her up just right! She broke two nails in my back before i flipped her over. Here cums the encore. I finished her quick. But i got dressed quicker. Cigarette anyone?

horus8 13-Sep-02/7:57 PM
i demand to know why this tripe isn't on the worst list? it meets all of the requirements and it has a score 0f 2.99 must it also make inanimate objects speak? must it fell another virgin forest? how long must the young woman of this beautiful planet go without revenge? vote for death by queero! vote zero. <brought to you by 'tireless' why travel on rubber? when you can go tireless, and 'rash guard' why go out with a rash? when you can just work for one?




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