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Concieted Checkmate. (Free verse) by LuckyJoe
***********Second Draft Below************* Conceit-ion the game of chess, Strategically plan each move, Both players the same in every way, The challenge of attempting to mate, Get close only to walk away, Don’t want what can be had, Only chase after what runs, The rules of engagement understood, Didn’t pay any attention for a day; made a move, Your turn now, bad choice got lured in. See you attempted pawning the heart, The rook with shaky foundation still stood, Down a long strait, distant from action, Getting the reaction of worry, A knock on the door you’ve come calling. Afraid a knight will make you feel of a queen, Gallantly shinning he walks catching your eye, Drawing you in again for a day. You’re the queen, now demanding all attention, Once accomplished chewed up and spit out, Strategy will capture a succulent piece, The board of relations king I play, Goddess of beauty can’t defend the planning, Each move you make, the other side a step ahead. As king I’ll capture your heart, Checkmate! Nowhere to run you’re all mine. *********First Draft Below*********** Conceit-ion the game of chess, Strategically plan each move, Both players the same in ever way, Love the challenge of attempting to mate, Get close only to walk away, Don’t want what can be had, Only chase after what runs, The rules of engagement understood, Didn’t pay any attention for a day; made a move, Your turn now, bad choice lured you in. See you attempted pawning the heart, The rook one step ahead galloped away, Down a long strait, distancing from action, Worked well getting the reaction of worry, Right behind you come calling. Afraid you can’t have your knight, Gallantly shinning he’s walking onward. Drawing you in again for a day. You’re the queen demanding all attention, Once accomplished chewed up and spit out, Strategy will capture a succulent piece, The board of relations as king I play, Goddess of beauty you can’t defend the planning, Each move you make, the other side a step ahead. As kind I’ll capture you’re heart, No more moves now your love is mine, Checkmate... in the process of dating. **Has it got better or worse?**

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